tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23051453.post3181546630866773308..comments2023-11-02T06:57:11.400-04:00Comments on BookEnds Literary Agency: Query Critique #7BookEnds, A Literary Agencyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06287278822065839469noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23051453.post-77561532426315707282007-11-19T17:49:00.000-05:002007-11-19T17:49:00.000-05:00This sounds like a great idea for a thriller novel...This sounds like a great idea for a thriller novel, if done correctly. I agree with the critique completely:craft a more grabby opening statement, followed by the <I>meat</I> of the story. Describe the story in using specific action verbs and highlighting emotion. Good luck.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com