Thursday, August 04, 2011

Life Doesn't Just Happen to Us

When writing your book and later your query, it's important to remember that a successful book, and therefore a successful query, isn't just about life happening to the character. To make a book, and query, work, you need to have your character be an active participant in life.

Therefore, if you're telling me that your character's house burned down, her husband left her, her best friend died, and then her dog ran away, I'm frankly feeling your book is a little ho-hum. Clearly your book is happening around your character, to your character, but your character isn't doing anything. Maybe if her husband left her and then she shot him I might be more interested.


Jessica

18 comments:

Janet Reid said...

How about her dog is on the lam, cause he shot the husband who was philandering with the neighbor? Also, there are vampires.

wv: osistr (which is exactly what I can hear somone say to this comment "oh, sister!")

Joyce said...

Janet, you forgot the zombies.

BookEnds, LLC said...

and the fact that the husband now comes back as a ghost to help her find the dog

Anonymous said...

I see your point. But Barbara Kingsolver's character in The Lacuna was pretty passive and I thought that was a lovely novel. But she is a fantastic writer.

Rosemary said...

But the dog has morphed into a werewolf. (The bullet was silver.)

ryan field said...

A great example of this could be Fannie Flagg's novel, I Still Dream About You. All through the beginning of the book life happens to the mc, and then she starts taking steps and making her own things happen.

Nicole said...

LOL - that last line!

One of the many reasons I love this blog. XD

Skipperhammond@gmail.com said...

Bad enough if main character is passive. Even worse if he/she whines about all the abuse being suffered.

Amish Stories said...

The description you just made sounds like the story of my life. Richard from Amish Stories

Carrie Butler said...

Nothing like a Jessica and Janet tag team scenario to start the weekend! ;)

Katrina L. Lantz said...

Awesome! Was just thinking about this concept, character-driven vs. plot-driven. Plot-driven always feels contrived to me. I like to see a character make a huge mistake that affects everything and then struggle to work around what can't be changed. Maybe her husband left because she got caught cheating, and now the guy she cheated with is with another woman, and she has to decide if she's fit for marriage after all while dealing with her dog's unsightly leg-humping habit.

Angie said...

Thanks for the great advice.

Donna K. Weaver said...

ROFL - shoot that man!

Jeannie said...

No, no, no, the husband and the dog ran away together to escape the zombie-vampire secret society that murdered the neighbor who was about to reveal all their plans to News of the World. Oh, and our heroine is secretly a vampire, but she doesn't know it yet.

Ah, sorry, couldn't resist. :D

Laura W. said...

Hamlet being the exception, of course. :P

Anna Banks said...

A famous writer (Gosh I wish I could remember who!!!) said, "I make my characters DO as much as possible."

I always try to follow this example.

Happy Friday to all!

Leslie Deaton said...

Ha! I loved this one...but you did make me question the happenings in A Marked Past. A lot happens in it but I do think the main character is actively involved and makes her own life changing decisions. (no guns though, sorry) :)

furrykef said...

I dunno. I think the main character in the first three books of The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy is a character who largely has things happen to him instead of taking any initiative of his own. It's only in the fourth book that he has some initiative, and in the fifth he becomes passive again. All five are great books.

Of course, the things that happen to Arthur are ridiculously extraordinary, and being a fish out of water is the entire point of his character, so perhaps he's an atypical example.